Talk:Lucy Kaopaulu Peabody/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links N: http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/ and http://www.nhch.com/cms/View.aspx/Show/OurBenefactor-LucyKalanikumaikiekieHenriques are dead.

• User:Iazyges. Fixed the link to https://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/. It just missing an s. Had to toss the second because it is no longer retrievable one and added alternative sources instead.

• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

• she helped re-establish and became the second founder of the Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy. suggest:

  she founded the reestablished Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy.

• @KAVEBEAR: That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 10:30, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

  Changed prose as suggested. KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:25, 23 July 2018 (UTC)