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Reviewer: Z105space (talk · contribs) 17:00, 4 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I will be happy to review this article. Comments will appear soon. Z105space (talk) 17:00, 4 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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  • There should be a mention of Pirelli being Formula One's sole tyre supplier.
 Done
  • "Constructors standings" - The world standings should be replace with championship which should be capitalised.
 Done

Regulation changes

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  • Delink Daniel Ricciardo in this section as he is already linked in a another sentence in the main background sub-section.
Removed all repeat links (there were a couple more).
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  • It would be helpful to explain who Bernie Ecclestone is to the general audience.
 Done

Free practice

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  • "two 1.5-hour sessions on Friday and another one-hour session before qualifying on Saturday" - I feel the word 1.5-hour should be replaced by 90-minute.
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  • "The session was stopped for ten minutes to repair the barriers." - Who repaired the barriers?
 Done
  • "separated by the Red Bulls" This should be amended to say "separated by the Red Bull drivers"/
 Done

Race

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  • Wikilink is needed for Virtual Safety Car.
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  • "a little less than two laps from the finish," - It's better remove the words "a little less".
 Done Removed "a little".
  • "Unharmed by his teammate in second" - The word Unharmed needs to be reworded to Unchallenged.
 Done

Post-race

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  • "Vettel received additional support from former driver David Coulthard" - Should be written "Vettel received additional support from Coulthard" and you should place the words former driver to the first mention of Coulthard in the post-race subsection.
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  • "ahead of the two Manor Marussias" - this should say "ahead of the two Manor Marussia drivers".
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  • "He also called for immediate action considering the Italian Grand Prix" -It would read better if the word "considering" was replaced with "for".
I feel that "considering" is warranted, since it gives a causal connection between the fact that Monza is a high speed track and the dangers of tyre blowups at that track.

References

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  • Reference 3 should have Formula1.com in the work field and the publisher should be Formula One Management not the FIA.
  • Same issue above with references 14, 15, 16.
 Done Replaced Publisher with "Formula One Digital Media Limited", the publisher named at Formula1.com
  • The Guardian should be italicised in all instances it is used as well as The Telegraph.
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Nothing, I stopped using that site a while ago but did not get around to exchange all the instances I've used it at before. I have replaced it now with a link from f1technical, which I believe is a RS, but please check if you think so too, I'm not entirely sure.

I will put his on hold for seven days until the nominator rectifies the above issues. Z105space (talk) 12:41, 6 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Please re-evaluate with the changes I have made. Thank you for the review! :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 14:25, 6 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Looks better. I can promote this to GA class. Good work! :) Z105space (talk) 14:48, 6 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you! :) Zwerg Nase (talk) 14:55, 6 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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