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Unusual tone
editThis article needs rewriting to remove an archaic writing style.
Examples:
"finding the necessity for some simpler method"
"in an evil hour he joined an engineering establishment" 2406:2D40:73F1:9710:2457:2BD7:7A9C:291A (talk) 09:16, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
- First example looks ok to me, any suggestions? I've adjusted the second one and added a tag as it's unsourced. Thanks. Martinevans123 (talk) 10:18, 26 March 2024 (UTC)