Talk:Atlantic Council Global Citizen Awards

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On 21 October 2024, it was proposed that this article be moved from Global Citizen Awards to Atlantic Council Global Citizen Awards. The result of the discussion was moved.

Proposed changes

Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented.

I work with the comms team at the Atlantic Council and I'd like to propose a few updates to this article, starting with the description of the event.

Specific text to be revised: Global Citizen Awards is presented by the Atlantic Council annually to individuals who have made exceptional and distinctive contributions to strengthening the transatlantic relationship.

CHANGED TO Global Citizen Awards are presented by the Atlantic Council annually to individuals who underscore “the Atlantic Council's critical mission to shape the global future together” and who "seek to improve the state of the world."

Reason for the change: For the grammar fix: Awards is plural. Added more direct language from Atlantic Council on why the awards are presented.
References supporting change: https://sponsored.foreignpolicy.com/atlantic-council/these-leaders-are-defining-what-it-means-to-be-a-global-citizen/

Partly done, grammar fixed but synthesis should generally be preferred over quotes. Rusalkii (talk) 19:56, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Specific text to be added: I request this be added after the first sentence about the award:

The awards are presented annually during the United Nations General Assembly week in New York.

Reason for the change: This provides more context on where/when the awards are given.
References supporting change: https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/events/global-citizen-awards-2023/

https://sponsored.foreignpolicy.com/atlantic-council/these-leaders-are-defining-what-it-means-to-be-a-global-citizen/ https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/global-citizen-awards/

Done Rusalkii (talk) 19:56, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you @Rusalkii. Much appreciated.

The sentence as it is now is not accurate. The award is more broad than just transatlantic focus. How about this instead?

Zackbaddorf (talk) 18:40, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I agree "transatlantic" doesn't seem to be the only focus but this is still too close a paraphrase of the source. Rusalkii (talk) 21:49, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks @Rusalkii. I appreciate you reviewing and for explaining that it's too close of a paraphrase. How about this change instead?

Zackbaddorf (talk) 16:37, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Specific text to be added or removed:

2024

• Nana Akufo-Addo - President of Ghana

• Kyriakos Mitsotakis - Prime Minister of Greece

• Giorgia Meloni - Prime Minister of Italy

• Miky Lee - Vice Chairwoman, CJ Group

Reason for the change: Updating to be more recent.
References supporting change: https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/global-citizen-awards/

Specific text to be added or removed:

2023

• Volodymyr Zelenskyy – President of Ukraine

• Olaf Scholz – Chancellor of Germany

• Fumio Kishida – Prime Minister of Japan

• Janet Yellen – United States Secretary of the Treasury

• Victor L.L. Chu – Chairman and CEO of First Eastern Investment Group (Distinguished Service Award)

Reason for the change: Updating to be more recent.
References supporting change: https://www.president.gov.ua/en/news/volodimir-zelenskij-vid-imeni-ukrayinskogo-narodu-otrimav-pr-85773

https://mia.mk/en/story/scholz-zelensky-among-those-awarded-global-citizen-awards https://www.mofa.go.jp/na/na1/us/page4e_001478.html https://home.treasury.gov/news/press-releases/jy1754 https://www.chathamhouse.org/about-us/our-people/victor-chu

Done, though note that your source for Chu didn't actually contain the relevant infomration. I've replaced it. Rusalkii (talk) 19:56, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Since I work for the Atlantic Council and thus have a conflict of interest, I will not be making any changes to the page myself. I am hoping, though, that editors who watch this Talk page will be able to review this request and then update the page. I appreciate your attention to this matter. Zackbaddorf (talk) 21:09, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Remove inaccurate information and revise title

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered.

I work with the comms team at the Atlantic Council and I'd like to propose a few updates to this article.

REMOVAL REQUEST

Specific text to be removed:

2004 Stanislav Petrov - lieutenant colonel, who played a key role in the 1983 Soviet nuclear false alarm incident.

Reason for the change: This information was erroneously added. If you look at the link, you'll see that it mentions that Petrov was provided the "World Citizen Award" by the Association of World Citizens (AWC). Of course, flagging that the two references be removed as well.

References supporting change: https://web.archive.org/web/20200731194757/https://brightstarsound.com/

TITLE REVISIONS

Specific text to be revised:

Reason for the change: Correcting this to reflect the proper formatting of the page on Wikipedia.

References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prime_Minister_of_Norway

Specific text to be revised:

Reason for the change: Adding link to Wikipedia page.

References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jazz_at_Lincoln_Center

Specific text to be revised:

Reason for the change: Adding link to Wikipedia page.

References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jordan

Specific text to be revised:

Reason for the change: Adding link to Wikipedia page.

References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/National_League_for_Democracy

Since I work for the Atlantic Council and thus have a conflict of interest, I will not be making any changes to the page myself. I am hoping, though, that editors who watch this Talk page will be able to review this request and then update the page. I appreciate your attention to this matter.

Zackbaddorf (talk) 18:41, 10 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, having reviewed this request I am happy for you to go ahead and make the changes yourself. Thank you for following the COI request process. Axad12 (talk) 09:00, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you @Axad12! I made the changes and flagged my COI in the edits as well. Zackbaddorf (talk) 16:21, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Appreciated, thank you for following the COI edit procedure with this request. Axad12 (talk) 16:24, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined.

I work with the comms team at the Atlantic Council and I'd like to propose a move of the page as explained below.

Not done: Hi, this isn't something that can be handled with a COI edit request, please see WP:RM Encoded Talk 💬 09:44, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 21 October 2024

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: moved. (closed by non-admin page mover) Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 04:09, 6 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Global Citizen Awards → Atlantic Council Global Citizen Awards – Per Wikipedia's Article_titles policy, a good Wikipedia article title has "Precision – The title unambiguously identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects." The Atlantic Council is one of multiple organization that has a 'Global Citizen Award.' While it is important to note that the Atlantic Council has annually honored notable world leaders, mostly presidents and prime ministers, since 2010, the Atlantic Council's Global Citizen Awards should be differentiated from the other similarly named awards. The other awards:

Clinton Global Citizen Award https://www.whitehouse.gov/briefing-room/speeches-remarks/2024/09/23/remarks-by-president-biden-receiving-the-clinton-global-citizen-award-new-york-new-york/

Waislitz Global Citizen Award https://www.globalcitizen.org/en/programs/waislitz-award/

Henley & Partners' Global Citizen Award https://www.henleyglobal.com/philanthropy/corporate-social-responsibility/global-citizen-award

University of South Florida's Global Citizens Award https://www.usf.edu/undergrad/hipur/programs/global-citizens-project.aspx

UNCW Office of Global Partnerships and International Education's Global Citizen Award https://uncw.edu/myuncw/seahawk-life/support-success/international/fac-staff/awards/global-citizen-award

SOKA University Global Citizen Award https://www.soka.edu/soka-global-citizen-award

UN Association Global Citizen Award https://www.unadane.org/global-citizen-award.html

Experiment in International Living Global Citizen Award https://www.eilireland.org/explore/action-at-home/the-global-citizen-award/

The International Global Citizen’s Award http://globalcitizensaward.org/

Jacksonville University's Global Citizen Award https://www.ju.edu/globalcitizen/

Georgetown Baratta Center for Global Business's Global Citizen Award https://globalbusiness.georgetown.edu/global-impact-award/

AMISA Global Citizen Award https://www.amisa.us/awards

Broder-Ackermann Global Citizen Award https://www.caes.uga.edu/students/scholarships/broder-ackermann.html

Alternatively, I suppose the article could be named Global Citizen Awards (Atlantic Council) per Parenthetical disambiguation under Article_titles to differentiate it from the others. Zackbaddorf (talk) 20:24, 21 October 2024 (UTC) — Relisting. Raladic (talk) 01:00, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Note: WikiProject Awards has been notified of this discussion. Raladic (talk) 01:00, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Support name change to either option, Global Citizen Awards (Atlantic Council) may be preferable if it needs disambiguating in the future. Encoded Talk 💬 21:37, 30 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.